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Belle
Mar-18-2008, 10:34 GMT
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| Relentlessly pursuing an impossible dream
For 730 days on earth, living in daze
Harboring endless desires
Pirates burying their priceless treasures
With my 6 strings, I play your tune
My fingers sore, heart is waning
Singing to your melodious tune
The tune that is much older than me
Settles like Old aged tea
The words penetrates this soul
Pinning for your presence
Just a sheer sight of your performance
Your caress of your guitar
Fingers plucking through the air
Wonders it may seem
Such surreal, such wonderful dream
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Peter
Mar-19-2008, 02:01 GMT
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| I could naver write anything as eloquent and melodious as that. Well done! |
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nancy
Mar-19-2008, 04:29 GMT
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| Well done,Belle. |
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Belle
Mar-19-2008, 07:25 GMT
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| Hi Peter/Nancy, thanks for your encouragement! What I felt that time, i penned it down my heartful thoughts. Glad you enjoyed it! Have a good day ahead! |
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